I love the idea of a flying wale and that it makes clouds, I can't think of anything to help you add on but I do wish you luck on this, can't wait to see it!
well, I like your story so much that I have no comments and uh....yeah, a whale. Good call.I do have a fact, though. When whales blow steam out of their blow hole, it is usually a purple color, unless they have a cold or something, and then its kind of a green-yellow. Pure fact. I saw it on the discovery channel the other night, but I didn't tape it. Sorry.
I really like your story and I can't wait to see it implemented. I'll just remind you that I think you should have the establishing shot of clouds before we even see the whale, that way the audience is already familiar with the fact that these are clouds in the sky, not farts from a fly whale. It helps I think. ^_^
I'd like to see the whale try and be really slick with the dirigible. I mean, he could go all cutesy and fawn over it, but I think a whale who's really putting on the moves, really laying on some sleaze, is even funnier.
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